- it is now an accomplished and complete piece of work;
- the use of text is much clearer and gives a a small insight to the artist's intentions too;
- the quality of sound is so much more clear;
- there is a clear distinction of footsteps walking through leaves mud and water;
- an overall impression is one of a very effective, relevant and contemporary, art-based video installation;
- it looks and feels very complete and professional;
- the audio has improved too;
- the sound track is much improved and I felt that I was doing the walk;
- the black background works;
- it made me feel that someone was about to step into the scene;
- a big step forward. The text is better and feels more suited to the work.
In case I should get too carried away with such positive comments, there were also a couple of critical pointers to be taken into account:-
- the images are now, perhaps a tad too small. I it possible for there to be a compromise?
- the sound fades at one point and then suddenly comes back;
- perhaps the soundtrack should fade a little early at the end of the show.
The these last points were easy to resolve and I have now done that. The link to the final version is here.
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